Suspense

The River Was Already Over the First Step

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You came from Facebook? Here's the other halfRiver water washes over the bottom step of a white wooden porch at dusk.

Tessa knew the porch steps by the way they disappeared. At six, the river had reached the bottom one. At six fifteen, it covered the first board. The second step was still dry when the sheriff told her every house on Alder Row was empty.

“Even Mr. Harlan’s?” she asked.

“His daughter picked him up at four.”

Tessa had worked the county ferry long enough to recognize his hat across a parking lot. On a normal morning, she waved to him from the deck as the ferry passed his house. He always waved back with his whole arm, as if her boat were a hundred yards farther away than it was.

The ferry had stopped running at noon. Now she was at the roadblock with a thermos and a pair of gloves, watching the volunteer crew get ready to pull back. The town’s flat-bottom rescue boat waited in the flooded intersection. Beyond it, brown water moved across the pavement so smoothly it looked shallow.

An orange cat sat on the roof of a parked car on the dry side of the road. Tessa recognized the ragged ear. Mr. Harlan called the cat Doctor, although as far as she knew it belonged to three households and had never answered to anything.

“Did his daughter take him straight home?” Tessa asked.

The sheriff checked his list. “She called from the shelter. Said she got him out.”

Tessa took two steps toward the water and stopped at the tape. Mr. Harlan’s downstairs windows were dark. The second-floor one was open a few inches. The little white curtain kept lifting out through the gap and falling back.

“Can you ask her where she dropped him?” Tessa said.

The sheriff reached for his radio. Before he could speak, something scraped upstairs, loud enough that the woman beside the rescue boat turned around.

From the dark upstairs window came a voice Tessa recognized saying, “I can’t leave him here.”

“Mr. Harlan?” Tessa shouted.

His hand appeared first, flat against the sash. “I came back before the water was over the walk.”

The sheriff called the boat crew back. Two of them climbed in, their orange life jackets bright against the brown water. Tessa stayed by the tape and called up to the window again.

“If it’s Doctor, he’s out here. He’s on a car.”

A pause. “It’s Ralph.”

Tessa knew Ralph as the man who used to take the early ferry to work at the mill. He’d moved to a nursing home the year before and died in June. On the last morning he rode with her, he had stood on the deck after the gate opened because he wanted to finish telling her about a trout.

She could hear the rescue boat’s motor working against the current. One of the crew pointed a flashlight toward the porch. The second step was gone now. The rail rose out of the water and ended where a splintered piece of fence had caught against it.

At the upstairs window Mr. Harlan turned away. When he came back, he was holding a brown wooden box the size of a bread loaf. Tessa saw the little brass corners flash.

“It was on the mantel,” he called. “I got all the way to the shelter before I remembered.”

The boat crew reached the house from the lee side. A rescuer stepped onto the porch landing and came up the stairs inside. When she appeared at the window, Mr. Harlan had the box pressed to his chest with both arms.

“Can you carry it?” he asked her.

“Yes,” she said. “I’ll take it down for you.”

He held on for another second. Then he set the box into her hands.

Mr. Harlan hands a small wooden box to a rescuer by an upstairs window.

When they got back to the roadblock, the second rescuer carried the box ashore while the first helped Mr. Harlan off the boat. His shoes made a small squeak on the pavement. Tessa took off her gloves and gave them to him. He put on one and held the other in his lap.

Doctor hopped down from the car. The cat came over, sniffed the corner of the box, and walked away with his tail up.

Mr. Harlan watched him go. “Ralph would’ve said that cat had some nerve.”

Tessa sat beside him on the curb. Beyond the tape the porch light came on for a second, then went out. Mr. Harlan slipped on the other glove and reached for the box.

She held it steady while he got both hands underneath.

Tessa steadies a wooden box while Mr. Harlan puts both hands beneath it.

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